Your friend is coming to your country from abroad, but you can't go to pick him up at the airport. Write a letter to him/her and say -why you can't pick him up -suggest alternative ideas -talk about what he can do in your country

#friend #country #airport #-why #-suggest #alternative #-talk

Dear John, I hope you're doing great, I saw your

last

message saying that you are

coming

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coming to

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KSA soon,

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and

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I'm very glad to hear that.

Unforuntately

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Unfortunately

, I

can'nt

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can't

pick you

from

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up from

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the airport

during

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that day. I discovered that I have a dentist appointment that I have been waiting for so long. It's at 5p.m exactly the time when you arrived. .

Also

, when I tried to

rearranage

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rearrange

it, I was unable because there

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are

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avaliable

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available

ones. I think taking Uber would be

perfect

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the perfect

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idea for you, as it has a lower cost in my country. I

also

suggests

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that you request a ride very

ealy

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early

so you can catch it easily. Of

course

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course,

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you're invited to my home as

soos

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soon

as you

arrived

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arrive

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, we can have

the

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dinner together, and I will cook for you the meal you like. As well,watching a movie at

the

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night would be nice. see you soon, Nouf Best wishes,

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The logical structure could be improved by organizing the content more effectively. Ensure each paragraph discusses one main idea.

coherence cohesion

Work on avoiding typographical errors and improving spelling and grammar to enhance clarity.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph has a clear, single idea. For example, discuss why you can't pick him up in one paragraph, suggest alternatives in another, and what he can do in a separate paragraph.

task achievement

Include more details in your response, like specific activities your friend can do in your country and how to navigate from the airport.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately warm and fit the context well.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is very friendly and suitable for writing to a friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

158 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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