Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Aziz,
Hi Aziz, How are you? Long time no see. I hope
this
letter finds you in good condition. Berry told me last
week about your planing
that's you want to visit my Correct your spelling
planning
country
next month and travelling
here. I would like to tell you about a couple Wrong verb form
travel
things
when you visit my Change preposition
of things
country
.
For your information, my country
has two season
Change to a plural noun
seasons
between
rainy and summary. And the best time of year to visit my Change preposition
apply
country
on the last
rainy and the first summary
season, because you can find the amazing views in every nature destination at the time. You can find it Correct your spelling
summer
arround
Correct your spelling
around
of
Change preposition
around
may
until Capitalize the word
May
july
.
After you Change the capitalization
July
are arrive
Change the verb form
arrive
in
Soekarno Hatta Airport, you can choose public transport Change preposition
at
such
as bus
, taxi, Correct article usage
a bus
and
online driver. But I suggest you Correct word choice
or
to
choose a bus for your Remove the particle
apply
accomodation
, because my house Correct your spelling
accommodation
near
Add a missing verb
is near
by
Change preposition
apply
bus
halte, Correct your spelling
the
therefore
, you can find my house immediately.
When you was
arrive and stay Unnecessary verb
apply
in
my house, I will Change preposition
at
be invite
you to Change the verb form
invite
hangaround
Correct your spelling
hang around
for enjoying
the most beautiful place in my Change preposition
to enjoy
country
, that is
sembalun
Village. You can see the Rinjani mountain there, Change the capitalization
Sembalun
that is
the higher
mountain Correct word choice
highest
in
my island.
Yours Change preposition
on
Sincerelly
Agus,Correct your spelling
Sincerely
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language
Ensure that the sentences are grammatically correct and the spelling and punctuation are accurate. For instance, 'season between rainy and summary' should be 'seasons: rainy and summer'.
structure
Make sure to structure your paragraphs clearly. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea. For example, separate paragraphs for describing the best time to visit, types of accommodation, and what to show your friend.
task completion
You've addressed all parts of the task, such as recommending the best time to visit, describing accommodations, and mentioning places to show your friend.
tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for a letter to a friend.
content
Including detailed and specific information, such as the Sembalun Village and Rinjani mountain, makes your letter more vivid and interesting.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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