Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter •suggest someone you think should receive the award •describe what the person does to help the community •suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear Sir,
I have seen the offer your newspaper are foresting so I want to postulate the karate class' teacher whose name is Oliver. First of all, he is a good example for all the
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task response
Proofread your writing to correct minor spelling and grammatical errors, such as 'foresting' (should be 'offering'), 'stundents' (should be 'students'), 'attent' (should be 'attend'), 'surrounders' (should be 'surroundings' or 'bystanders'), 'behaive' (should be 'behave'), 'weakenesses' (should be 'weaknesses'), 'adressed' (should be 'addressed'), 'been taken' (should be 'are taken'), 'in regars to' (should be 'with regard to'), 'comunity' (should be 'community'), 'preferd' (should be 'preferred'), 'behaivour' (should be 'behavior').
coherence cohesion
Try to develop your ideas more clearly and extensively in separate paragraphs to enhance the logical flow and coherence of your letter.
task response
The letter addresses all parts of the task by suggesting a person for the award, describing their contributions to the community, and suggesting an appropriate award.
task response
The tone of the letter is mostly appropriate for a formal letter to a newspaper editor.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a greeting and a closing, which helps to structure the communication formally.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,