The chart below shows the percentage of men and women who did various free time activities in England.

The chart below shows the percentage of men and women who did various free time activities in England.
The bar chart illustrates information about both sexes participating in different kinds of activities in their leisure
time
in England.
Overall
,
males
are likely to spend more
time
on most activities, with the exception of shopping and spending
time
with family.
Additionally
, watching TV is the most popular entertainment among both genders. Looking in
further
detail, watching TV has the highest rate, with a roughly similar proportion between
women
and
men
, over 75%. Regarding doing exercise and reading, the data are nearly the same for females, at about 72% and in terms of
males
, it is exactly 75% for doing sports or exercise,
however
, the remaining field does not reach that peak. Moving onto other activities,
women
tend to spend
time
with family rather than
men
, but the gap between both sexes is not very large, just about 75%. Shopping depicted around 75% of females prefer
this
activity and the figure for
males
is lower, at over one-fourth a little, making it the biggest difference between
women
and
men
.
Conversely
, using the internet had more
men
than
women
, with around 75% of
males
and 35% of females. The least enjoyable activity is playing computer games, with approximately 13% of
women
and 18% of
men
.

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