You recently received an invitation to a dinner party at your friend’s house. Write a letter to accept the invitation. In your letter: • explain why you are accepting the invitation • describe why you are looking forward to the dinner party • offer to bring a dish to share

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Dear Sara, How have you been? I missed the wonderful time we had together at the school. I

got

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was

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very glad when your invitation

had been

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was

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recieved

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received

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me. I accept your invitation, definitely. I thought it would be a

glamourous

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glamorous

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time

which

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when

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meet

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met

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each other again.

This

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would be a unique opportunity in order to talk about mutual friends and diaries and

having

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have

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tremondous

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tremendous

dinner again. I never forget your nack for cooking. As I

remeber

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remember

you were an

aminient

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eminent

imminent

chef and your dishes were fabulous. In

addititon

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addition

, I

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am swamed

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swamed

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slammed

with work all

the

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apply

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day during the week and I don't have

enoght

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enough

time

for eating

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to eat

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a suitable dinner.

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, it would be an unbelievable option

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for

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me to try your special dish that night. Having said that, your dishes are very

worthful

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worthwhile

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for me.

Due to

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the fact that I

sugget

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suggest

bringing a dish to share.It would be a blast! I hope I

could

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see you soon at your house. Best wishes, Mahshid

kargar.mh1992Wed Jun 05 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph expresses a single idea clearly. For instance, your second paragraph mixes compliments about your friend's cooking with your busy work schedule. These could be separated for better clarity.

task achievement

Pay close attention to spelling and grammatical errors. Words like 'tremondous' should be 'tremendous,' and 'nack' should be 'knack.' Proofreading your work can help you catch these mistakes.

task achievement

The overall tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for the context.

task achievement

You effectively conveyed your acceptance and enthusiasm for the invitation.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are well-structured and suitable for an informal letter to a friend.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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