The pie charts show the amount of money that a Kazakh charity organization spent and received in 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the amount of money that a Kazakh charity

organization spent and received in 2019.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main

features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts represent the amount of expense and revenue of charity
organisation
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in Kazakhstan for the year 2019. As an
overall
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trend, the majority of the revenue was made by donated food,
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the most of expense was spent on program services. The total money income was slightly greater than the total expenditures, which were 53,561,580 dollars and 53,224,896 dollars
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According to
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the first chart, it is noteworthy that donated food occupied the largest proportion, accounting for 86.6%,
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community contributions contributed the most of the rest proportion, for 10.4%.
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, the remaining four sources, which were program revenue, investment income, government grants and others add up to a neglectable 3%. Turning to the information about how that money was spent, apparently, the program services appreciated the largest percentage, accounting for 95.8%. Apart from that, the percentage investment for fundraising and management and general had a similar figure, which was 2.6% and 1.6% respectively, attributing for the remaining spent.
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