It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Living in a society, our identification

are

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usually strongly influenced by

others

'

opinion

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opinions

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and

reaction

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reactions

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.

While

it is true that we often define ourselves by

others

' perspectives, it is

also

crucial to avoid the social tags from confining us and our possibilities. On one hand, we understand ourselves by interacting with people in the same group, through the

feedbacks

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given by

others

, and

combine

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combined

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with self-reflections, we

forms

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our identities.

For instance

, one who is

borned

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born

in

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a suburb

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suburb

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areas

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and later

entering

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ivy league

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Ivy League

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schools, and

being

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is

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surrounded by the elites can

result in

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experience

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huge changes in terms of self-identity and self-esteem. Studying in

highly

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a highly

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educated environment with abundant resources,

also

recieving

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receiving

complementary pleasants can elevate one's perspectives and

having

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positive

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self-picture, yet the fierce

competitions

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can be overwhelming and cause low self-esteem and depression.

On the other hand

, It is worth noticing

of

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being cautious about the invisible social tags. It is reasonable to take

others

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others'

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opinions

as

an

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reference and reflection about

oursleves

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ourselves

, yet be aware of these social values that can turn around and confine us from pursuing self achievements.

For example

, the famous film director Lee An,

who

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remained unknown

between

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for

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the first ten years of his career. Before his talents

are being

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were

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seen, people regarded him as a jobless and

unresponsible

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irresponsible

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husband who

depends

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depended

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on his wife for

living

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a living

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. He was aware of the

rumors

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, yet he continued to pursue his dream

,

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while

striving to keep

balance

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a balance

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between family and career. It takes more than patience and

strong

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mentality to distinguish oneself from these subjective

opinions

, and

this

is exactly the reason

of

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for

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his success.

To sum up

, people form self-portray by interacting with

others

in

the

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society.

It is clear that

we are hugely impacted by

others

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others'

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value

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values

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, perspectives, and

opinions

towards us.

However

, It is necessary to draw the line from possible negative impacts. Social

opinions

can form boundaries and

restaints

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restraints

restaurants

that limit our opportunities of

pursuring

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pursuing

personal achievement. It is our own responsibility to distinguish the differences.