The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the construction of a company between 2002 and 2009. The below passage will clear the changes.
Overall
, there are some differences surrounding the children's area
and entrance area
still unremain.
It can be seen that in 2001 the left area
had still amenities but till 2009 there were some facilities such
as a kitchen, economics area
or children's book that help students more easily learn and relax.
Children's areas are more expanded and focused on youth engagement and educational activities.
In addition
, newspapers and periodicals were exchanged for films and DVDs improving the demand of students for access to cutting-edge technology devices. Thereby, in 2009, the expansion of computer facilities that did not exist in 2001.Submitted by nhuquynhbn2004 on
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