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The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates comparatison in
number
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 of visitors to Britsh
Museum
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 ,
science
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Museum
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 and Natural
Museum
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 in London in 2013 from June to September. The data are measured in
thousand
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.
Overall
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,British
Museum
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 consistently accounted as the highest .The
number
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 of peaple who visit
Science
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Museum
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 are relatively low. On one hand,the initial
number
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 of British
museum
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 is 600
thousand
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 in june.
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, visitors
number
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 are icreased sagnificantly and reach a peak of around 740
thousand
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 in July .
However
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 , the figure declined next mounths before go up again and rech around 650 in September.
On the other hand
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,
science
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 and Natural History
Museum
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 started at about 400 and 550 respectively . They both showed a downward trend .
Science
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museum
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 hitt a low point of 300 befor rose again . With regard to Natural History
Museum
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 it remained stabel between July and August at approximetly 390
thousand
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then
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 it rose again . They both reach about 480
thousand
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at the end
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 of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, museum, science, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • illustrates
  • number of visitors
  • museums
  • from June to September 2013
  • the British Museum
  • the Natural History Museum
  • the Science Museum
  • overall trend
  • attracted
  • the most visitors
  • fewest visitors
  • peak
  • experienced fluctuations
  • decline
  • highlight
  • dominance
  • consistent decline
  • minor resurgence
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