The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates comparatison in
number
of visitors to Britsh
Museum
,
science
Museum
and Natural
Museum
in London in 2013 from June to September. The data are measured in
thousand
.
Overall
,British
Museum
consistently accounted as the highest .The
number
of peaple who visit
Science
Museum
are relatively low. On one hand,the initial
number
of British
museum
is 600
thousand
in june.
moreover
, visitors
number
are icreased sagnificantly and reach a peak of around 740
thousand
in July .
However
, the figure declined next mounths before go up again and rech around 650 in September.
On the other hand
,
science
and Natural History
Museum
started at about 400 and 550 respectively . They both showed a downward trend .
Science
museum
hitt a low point of 300 befor rose again . With regard to Natural History
Museum
it remained stabel between July and August at approximetly 390
thousand
then
it rose again . They both reach about 480
thousand
at the end
of the period.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • illustrates
  • number of visitors
  • museums
  • from June to September 2013
  • the British Museum
  • the Natural History Museum
  • the Science Museum
  • overall trend
  • attracted
  • the most visitors
  • fewest visitors
  • peak
  • experienced fluctuations
  • decline
  • highlight
  • dominance
  • consistent decline
  • minor resurgence
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