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The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.
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The bar chart illustrates the changing proportion of automobiles that families in one European nation have over a period of 30 years. In general, the one-
car
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 and two-
car
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 ownership rates tend to increase over time. Meanwhile, households with no private
car
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 witnessed a decrease. Having looked at the provided chart, in 1971, nearly 37% of households owned a
car
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while
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 48% of families did not have any automobile, 2.5 times more than two cars ownership. By 1981, the percentage of no cars declined slightly by approximately 7%. In the meantime, the two-automobile owners had a climb to 30% and people with one
car
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 experienced a slight fluctuation. Until 1991, the figure of people owning a
car
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 rocketed to 50% which is 2 and 2.5 times more than no automobile and two cars. After a decade, the number of people having a vehicle continued to drop by 5%. Among that, the number of persons with no vehicle levelled off at the similar to having two automobiles.

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