The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given two maps illustrate the changes that took place in the town of Barmouth to prevent cars from entering the old town from 1936 to 2007.

Overall

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, the spatial distribution of different function areas stays almost the same.

Firstly

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, for the central region, the size and the location of the post office, bank and library remain unchanged.

In contrast

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, the flower shop was turned into a travel agent,

while

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the place

initially

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for the sweet shop and butchers

were

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was

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merged and replaced by a supermarket, surrounding a new shopping centre built in 2007. Turning to outside regions, for the northwest part, the number of trees was reduced to one from 3.

Moreover

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, the cycle path located in the southwest part was changed into a road and a residential area on the northeast side was built from a river.

Lastly

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, a museum and a golf course appeared at the place for the government offices and farmland at

eastsouth

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east-south

east south

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

158 words

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The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some parents pressure their children to be successful in a specific field. What are the reasons for this? Is it negative or positive?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people are off the opinion that giving a good first impression at an interviewer is the key securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?

It is generally observed that almost all high level jobs are done by men. Does it mean that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? Do you agree or disagree with this proposition.