Write about the following topic: Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional food and traditional ways of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#topic #convenience #foods #food #preparation

Many people have different ways to think about it.but now traditional food has changed to modern

foods

.I do not agree

about

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with

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this

idea of changing local

foods

to modern

foods

this

era On the one

hand

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hand,

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traditional

foods

was

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were

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switching

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switched

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to modern

foods

because of

alteration

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the alteration

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of zona now.

However

,many pupils think that should be

relpace

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ready

in order they can find interesting

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apply

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customer

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customers

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when they sell it,if it will

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apply

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stay in their pack like

long

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a long

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time ago might be it will not to popular in

this

modern era.

Nevertheless

number

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a number

the number

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of communities think

that is

not too good to try it.Eventually,a lot of

factorys

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factors

factories

this

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these

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foods

has

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have

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thought that they have to move to

other style

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another style

other styles

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such

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apply

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advertaisment

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advertising

,packaging and the sense.

For example

, in my home town seller has made a good snack from

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a good

good

agood

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good

packaging and

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
56Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

306 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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