The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts illustrate the proportions of residents divided by age categories in two countries,
Yemen
and Italy, in 2000 and expectations in 2050.
Firstly
, in 2000 the number
of children
in Yemen
accounted for the half of total population, followed by adults
with 46.3%, however
in 2050 the main category, accounted
for 57.3%, will become Wrong verb form
accounting
people
15-59 years old, while
number
of Change the article
the number
children
will decrease to 37%.
Secondly
, in both Correct your spelling
countries
counteries
the Add a comma
counteries,
number
of people
in
Change preposition
with
age
Add an article
the age
an age
of
more than 60 will be doubled during Change preposition
apply
presented
period, albeit in Add an article
the presented
Yemen
this
category will remains
the smallest, less than 6%, Change the verb form
remain
while
in Italy there will be 42.3% of total
population.
Add an article
the total
Finally
, in Italy
the proportion of both Add a comma
Italy,
adults
and children
will decrease, from 61.6% to 46.2% and from 14.3% to 11.5% respectively.
Overall
, in Italy number
of Change the article
the number
adults
and children
will reduce and old people
will take almost the same share as adults
. In Yemen
number
of children
will shrink in favour of adults
and old people
.Submitted by vikiregev on
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