The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table demonstrates how many people had visited Ashdown Museum in the years before and after its renovation. Meanwhile, The charts illustrate the rate of individuals' satisfaction rate regarding their visit during the same time span.
Overall
, it is clear that
after refurbishment, not only the number
of visitors
but also
their satisfaction rate increased significantly.
Regarding the year before implementing refurbishments, the number
of visitors
was solely 74,000 people annually, the majority of which considered their visit unsatisfactory with 40% and 10% of them being dissatisfied and very dissatisfied, respectively. Moreover
, the survey results depict that less than 50% of them were pleased with their visits with 30% satisfied and 10% very satisfied.
Looking at the year after renewing the museum, the number
of visitors
surged dramatically to 92,000. In addition
to this
increment, their satisfaction rates also
witnessed a rise to more than 70% of the visitors
. Consequently
, dissatisfaction rates dwindled substantially to only 20% of the figure. Importantly, the proportion of people who didn't answer the survey remains unchanged at 5%.
Comparing these two years, the renovation proved effective as it increased the number
of attendees in addition
to making them pleased with their visit.Submitted by bita.rezaei7052 on
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