The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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of people travelling to a particular Caribbean

island

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from 2010 to 2017.

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the

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of

tourists

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who chose to stay on

cruise

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ships

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and inland

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increased over a period of 7 years. Between 2015 and 2016, people became more likely to stay on

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ships

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, and it kept the first position until 2017. In 2010, there were approximately 0.75

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visitors liked to stay on the

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, compared to only 0.25

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staying on

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ships

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. Over the following 5 years, even though

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' preference of place to live always changed, the

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of

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staying in these two places still showed an upward trend. Between 2015 and 2016, after two years remained at the same

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(1.5

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), the amount of choice

of

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island

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declined to around 1.25

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, overtook by the steadily increased

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of

cruise

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ship

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. In 2017, 2

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people

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on

cruise

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ships

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, which was 8 times as large as that in 2010.

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the

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of

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who came to

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island

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also

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experienced a considerable growth to 3.5

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.