The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The line graph illustrates the

number

of people travelling to a particular Caribbean

island

from 2010 to 2017.

It is clear that

the

number

of

tourists

who chose to stay on

cruise

ships

and inland

were

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both

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increased over a period of 7 years. Between 2015 and 2016, people became more likely to stay on

cruise

ships

, and it kept the first position until 2017. In 2010, there were approximately 0.75

million

visitors liked to stay on the

island

, compared to only 0.25

million

staying on

cruise

ships

. Over the following 5 years, even though

tourists

' preference of place to live always changed, the

number

of

tourists

staying in these two places still showed an upward trend. Between 2015 and 2016, after two years remained at the same

number

(1.5

million

), the amount of choice

of

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island

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islands

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declined to around 1.25

million

, overtook by the steadily increased

number

of

cruise

ship

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ships

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. In 2017, 2

million

people

staying

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on

cruise

ships

, which was 8 times as large as that in 2010.

While

the

amount

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of

tourists

who came to

this

island

also

experienced a considerable growth to 3.5

million

.