The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph delineates the number of
visitors
to three London museums, namely the British Museum
, the Science
Museum
, and the Natural History Museum
, from June
until September in
2013.
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Overall
, the British Museum
and the Science
Museum
saw significant increases in visitors
, while
the Natural History Museum
experienced a slight decline by the end of the period.
In detail, the Science
Museum
had around 400,000 visitors
in June
. The number slightly fell to about 300,000 in August before gradually climbing to just under 500,000 visitors
in September. The British Museum
started with approximately 600,000 visitors
in June
, rapidly increasing to just below 800,000 in July. However
, visitor numbers dropped to about 500,000 in August before rising again to over 600,000 at the end
of the period.
In contrast
, the Natural History Museum
had just over 500,000 visitors
in June
. The number declined to below 400,000 by August and remained steady until a slight improvement in September, reaching a figure similar to that of the Science
Museum
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