The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph delineates the number of
visitors
to three London museums, namely the British
Museum
, the
Science
Museum
, and the Natural History
Museum
, from
June
until September
in
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2013.
Overall
, the British
Museum
and the
Science
Museum
saw significant increases in
visitors
,
while
the Natural History
Museum
experienced a slight decline by the end of the period. In detail, the
Science
Museum
had around 400,000
visitors
in
June
. The number slightly fell to about 300,000 in August before gradually climbing to just under 500,000
visitors
in September. The British
Museum
started with approximately 600,000
visitors
in
June
, rapidly increasing to just below 800,000 in July.
However
, visitor numbers dropped to about 500,000 in August before rising again to over 600,000
at the end
of the period.
In contrast
, the Natural History
Museum
had just over 500,000
visitors
in
June
. The number declined to below 400,000 by August and remained steady until a slight improvement in September, reaching a figure similar to that of the
Science
Museum
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • illustrates
  • number of visitors
  • museums
  • from June to September 2013
  • the British Museum
  • the Natural History Museum
  • the Science Museum
  • overall trend
  • attracted
  • the most visitors
  • fewest visitors
  • peak
  • experienced fluctuations
  • decline
  • highlight
  • dominance
  • consistent decline
  • minor resurgence
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