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The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The graph illustrates the data about the proportion of citizens in different four Asia regions, which
are reside
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in particular
 cities between 1970 and 2020, with projections for
2030
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 and 2040 period.
Overall
, it can be seen that at the start period, in the 1970 year,
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the percentage
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 of Malaysians and Indonesians had not lived at the highest per
cent
, they are forecasted to be
majority
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the majority
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 percentage of the population residing in the next 70-year predictions, which Malaysia country is projected as the highest, followed by that Indonesia.
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 Thai residents
,
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 will be the lowest population among various nations. Starting from
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1970, amount of Malaysian and Indonesians living in their country was approximately 30 and just over 10 per
cent
 of
total
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the total
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 population, respectively.
Moreover
, both of them,
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they
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dramatically increased in each
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decade
dacades
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decade
 through 2020, and these are forecasted to
higher
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as
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 around 80 and 60 per
cent
, respectively. Filipinos experienced reaching
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the highest well over 30 per
cent
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of
total
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the total
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 people living in the year 1970,
while
 Thais people resulted
in
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just under 20 per
cent
. Both of them
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 a slight fluctuation until
in
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2020, which
are
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 predicted to be a rise at roughly 50
percentage
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per cent
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.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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