The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The graph compares the percentage of gross domestic product of European health expenditure for 12 different countries, which are Belgium, Denmark,
Estonia
, France, Lithuania, Luxembourg, Netherlands, Norway, Poland, Slovenia, Spain and Switzerland
for 3 years
, 2002, 2007 and 2012.
Overall
, it is shown that Switzerland
had the highest percentages for all years
while
Estonia
had the lowest. In addition
, we can observe significant fluctuation between the years
for both France and Netherlands
.
To start with, in 2002, Correct article usage
the Netherlands
Switzerland
showed the highest percentage at 11% approximately while
Estonia
had the lowest at 3%. Moreover
, in 2007, 2 countries, France and Switzerland
peaked at 11% for that year. On the other hand
, Estonia
had the lowest figure which was 3% that year as in 2002. Finally
, in 2012, we can see that again Switzerland
had the highest percentage which reached 11% and Estonia
the lowest at 3% as it occurred in the other years
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