The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs illustrate the number of
visitors
of
Carribean Island, divided by how they spend the days.
Change preposition
to
Overall
, there is a positive trend of
the extent of tourists visiting the island. During the 6 years, the total Change preposition
in
visitors
have been Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
grew
drastically, more than a three-fold increase, to 3.5 Change the verb form
growing
grown
million
in the last
depicted year
. Both visitors
from the cruise or the land play an essential role towards this
uprise
trend.
Change the verb form
uprising
To begin
with, in 2010, tourists stays
on the island contributed 1 unit more than those who Wrong verb form
staying
stays
on cruise ships. It gradually Wrong verb form
stayed
rising
, Wrong verb form
rose
then
in plateaud
on 1.5 Correct your spelling
plateaued
plateau
million
visitors
in three consequtive
years, 2012-2015. The number slightly Correct your spelling
consecutive
decrease
in the next Wrong verb form
decreased
year
, but hitting back to the stagnant point in 2017.
On the other hand
, generally, individuals whose
Correct pronoun usage
who
staying
on a cruise have significantly Wrong verb form
stay
increase
throughout the Change the verb form
increased
year
. It keeps
showing a good fluctuation Wrong verb form
kept
approximately
Change preposition
of approximately
by
1 Change preposition
apply
million
new visitors
each year
,
until it Remove the comma
apply
reaches
Wrong verb form
reached
the
peak in 2017 which accounted for 2 Change the word
its
million
tourists.Submitted by pocutarifahzahrina on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, million, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stays" was used 2 times.
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