The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the comparison between
the
Barmouth town in 1936 and Correct article usage
apply
in
2007 after the implementation of Change preposition
apply
restriction
on cars entering the old town. Fix the agreement mistake
restrictions
Overall
, there were big changes in the Linking Words
city
and only Use synonyms
post
office, library, and bank located in the middle of the Correct article usage
the post
city
Use synonyms
were still existed
.
The Change to the active voice
still existed
have still existed
area
outside the Use synonyms
central
of the Replace the word
centre
city
Use synonyms
were
totally changing. In the past, there were 3 trees, Change the verb form
was
however
, it turned to left only 1 tree in 2007. Linking Words
Beside
that, the government offices and the Replace the word
Besides
farm land
located in Correct your spelling
farmland
same
Change the article
the same
area
changed into Use synonyms
museum
and gold course, Correct article usage
a museum
meanwhile
the cycle path and river changed into Add a comma
meanwhile,
the
road and Correct article usage
a
residental
Correct your spelling
residential
area
in Use synonyms
the
2007.
Turning to Change the article
apply
inner
side of the central Add an article
the inner
city
, only 3 building had Use synonyms
been existed
Change to the active voice
existed
as
the same condition which Change preposition
in
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
post
office, bank, and library. There were 2 Add an article
a post
the post
building
which Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
sweet
shop and butches Add an article
a sweet
being
Unnecessary verb
apply
marging
into the supermarket, Correct your spelling
margins
margin
merging
also
there was a flower shop that was changed to Linking Words
travel
agent. Correct article usage
a travel
Beside
the changing Replace the word
Besides
on
the building, there Change preposition
of
were
an empty Change the verb form
was
area
in the middle, but in Use synonyms
the
2007 it Change the article
apply
were
turned Change the verb form
was
to
Change preposition
into
the
shopping centre.Correct article usage
a
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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