The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and charts show how it was distributes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area in Britain.
The given table and pie charts illustrate three different categories
on
the police budget in a certain area of Britain for 2017 and 2018. The table shows Change preposition
of
income
area of Correct article usage
the income
money
while
the charts show how the money
was spent.
Overall
, it can be seen from table
, Add an article
the table
there
was an upward trend for all three different categories between 2017 and 2018. Correct word choice
that there
In contrast
, in terms of distributing area, amount
of Correct article usage
the amount
money
to
spent on salaries decreased Change preposition
apply
while
salaries
category increased. Correct article usage
the salaries
In addition
, percentage
of spent on Correct article usage
the percentage
money
for
technology Change preposition
apply
unchanged
.
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is unchanged
To begin
with sources
of Correct article usage
the sources
police
budget, Add an article
the police
it is clear that
category of National Government which
had the highest amount of Correct pronoun usage
apply
money
in the given two years
, at £175.5m. Additionally
, it was almost twice as much as Local Texas which was the second largest sources
of police budget. Fix the agreement mistake
source
Beside
these, other sources Replace the word
Besides
such
as grants insignificantly increased over the time period, at £38m in 2017 and £38.5m in 2018.
On the other hand
, spent on money
for salaries had the highest percentage in 2017 and 2018, at 75% and 69% respectively. However
, it decreased almost
just over Change preposition
by almost
the
one in twenty in 2018. In opposite, Correct article usage
apply
money
was spent on technology, which was the least in total in all years
, noticeably rose
from 8% to 14%, and it accounts Wrong verb form
rising
just
below Change preposition
for just
the
double. In both Correct article usage
apply
years
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percentage
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a percentage
as
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of
the
both Remove the article
apply
years
it steadily
unchanged.Add a missing verb
was steadily
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