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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part time.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part time.
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The bar chart illustrates the enrollment of men and women in higher
education
 in
UK
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the UK
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 across the three
time
 periods,
along with
 their enrollment status, either full-
time
 or part-
time
. First and
above all
, in 1970 and 1971
average
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an average
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1000
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of 1000
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male
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males
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 were in
full
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full-time
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time
education
 and
this
number
 declined to approximately 850
for
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in
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 1980 and 1990.
In contrast
,
number
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the number
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 of part-
time
 students increased over
the
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apply
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time
although
 the
number
 was mostly lower than the
number
 of humans
which
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who
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 were registered in full-
time
education
. In 1970, nearly 100 people were in
part
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part-time
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time
education
 and in other 20 years,
this
number
 raised to 200. It is crucial to state that, in 1970,
number
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the number
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 of females who attended
to
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apply
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full
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full-time
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time
education
 was about 700 and
this
number
 reached
to
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apply
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almost 1200 in the given
time
 period and it is even higher than the
number
 of males who were in full-
time
education
 in
given
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the given
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 three
time
 periods.
Additionally
, the amount of female part-
time
 students increased over
time
 and reached
to
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apply
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over 200 in 1990 even
it
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though it
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 was nearly 20 in 1970. In essence,
according to
given
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the given
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 data females came a long way compared to males
about
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in
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 full-
time
 and part-
time
education
 in Britain in three periods.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, time, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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