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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part time.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part time.
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The bar chart illustrates the enrollment of men and women in higher
education
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 in
UK
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the UK
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 across the three
time
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 periods,
along with
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 their enrollment status, either full-
time
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 or part-
time
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. First and
above all
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, in 1970 and 1971
average
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an average
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1000
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of 1000
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male
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males
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 were in
full
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full-time
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time
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education
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 and
this
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number
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 declined to approximately 850
for
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in
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 1980 and 1990.
In contrast
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,
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number
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the number
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 of part-
time
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 students increased over
the
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apply
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time
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although
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 the
number
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 was mostly lower than the
number
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 of humans
which
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who
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 were registered in full-
time
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education
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. In 1970, nearly 100 people were in
part
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part-time
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time
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education
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 and in other 20 years,
this
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number
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 raised to 200. It is crucial to state that, in 1970,
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number
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the number
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 of females who attended
to
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apply
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full
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full-time
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time
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education
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 was about 700 and
this
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number
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 reached
to
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apply
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almost 1200 in the given
time
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 period and it is even higher than the
number
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 of males who were in full-
time
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education
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 in
given
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the given
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 three
time
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 periods.
Additionally
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, the amount of female part-
time
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 students increased over
time
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 and reached
to
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apply
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over 200 in 1990 even
it
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though it
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 was nearly 20 in 1970. In essence,
according to
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given
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the given
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 data females came a long way compared to males
about
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in
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 full-
time
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 and part-
time
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education
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 in Britain in three periods.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, time, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • further education
  • full-time study
  • part-time study
  • trend
  • overall number
  • time period
  • gender differences
  • increase
  • decrease
  • analyze
  • evaluate
  • societal changes
  • economic factors
  • educational policies
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