The table shows key data on the demographics of four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows key data on the demographics of four countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares
population
,
GDP
and average life expectancy in four nations.
Overall
,
China
with the largest
population
has the lowest
GDP
in contrast
to the
USA
with the highest.
People
in the
UK
tend to live longer than those in any other examined
countries
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. Starting with the
population
, the
population
of
China
is by far the most dominant with 1357000000, followed by the
USA
whose
population
is 318875000, which is almost twice as much as the number of
people
in Russia.
On the other hand
, the
UK
has the lowest
population
with 64937000. Turning to
GDP
, the
USA
seems to be the largest producer of capital with 53681, which is soon followed by the
UK
which has 41787.
China
is the country which has the lowest
GDP
with 6807, which is only about half of that of Russia.
Finally
, the average life expectancy is the longest in the
UK
at about 81.
Furthermore
,
people
in
China
and Russia tend to live longer than 70 as the former reaches just above 75
whereas
the latter is just below that
whereas
people
in the
USA
have the shortest longevity with slightly below 70.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, gdp, china, usa, people, uk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic metrics
  • age distribution
  • urbanization levels
  • population growth rates
  • life expectancy
  • birth rates
  • immigration policies
  • economic development
  • geographical size
  • historical factors
  • health care systems
  • infrastructure
  • quality of life
  • proportion
  • population size
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