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The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.
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The provided bar chart delineates the evolving patterns of
car
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ownership
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 within
households
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 across a European nation spanning from 1971 to 2001. Noteworthy is the gradual ascent in single and dual
car
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ownership
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, juxtaposed with a decline in
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-less
households
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. Particularly striking is the transition from the dominance of zero-
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households
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 at the outset to the prevalence of single-
car
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ownership
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 by the conclusion of the period.
Initially
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, single-
car
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 and dual-
car
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ownership
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 stood at approximately 35% and 17%, respectively. Single-
car
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ownership
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 experienced a dip to 30% within the first decade, followed by a zenith of nearly 50% in 1991,
subsequently
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 tapering off by approximately 7% by the period's end.
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, dual-
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ownership
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 fluctuated marginally above the 20% mark during the latter three decades of the 20th century. The proportion of
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car-less
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carless
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households
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 witnessed a notable decline from approximately 50% to slightly above 40% within the initial decade.
This
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 trend continued with heightened velocity, plummeting to approximately 30% by the period's conclusion, maintaining stability until 2001. In summation, the bar chart encapsulates a transformative narrative in
car
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ownership
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 trends, showcasing a steady rise in single and dual
car
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ownership
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,
while
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 witnessing a concurrent decline in
households
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 devoid of automobiles.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, ownership, households with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 4 times.
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