The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reportung the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reportung the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The vertical bar chart illustrates the hobby of consuming light beverages of
australian
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Australians
in 5 distinct metropolises during a particular month.
overall
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, it can be observed that the people purchasing either
coffee
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or tea in a cafe was the predominant mainstream in all urban areas with the exception of Adelaide where the dwellers had a tendency to go for
instant
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coffee
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.
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, even though fresh
coffee
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is the least popular within Australia, it still stayed at an acknowledgable level
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apart
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from Brisbane and Adelaide being the same. Take a look at 3 cities in which people have a habit of going to
coffee
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shops most. As for Sydney alongside Melbourne, there dwellers of both of these places who bought fresh
coffee
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comprised approximately 43%,
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more than 45% of them selected
instant
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coffee
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and roughly 62% went to
cafe
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cafes
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. in terms of Hobart, the people going to cafes consisted of over 60% which doubled those choosing fresh ones and more than a tenth of
instant
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coffee
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selections. turning to the remaining metropolises, where the number of commuters having a hobby in the cafeteria was the least. with regards to Brisbane, more a half of its citizens selected
instant
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coffee
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, whilst over 55% of them chose
coffee
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shops
instead
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which
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morethan
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more than
2times than ones going for fresh ones.
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