The chart below shows the average cost of a monthly contract for four different mobiles ( cellphones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.
Contained in the line graph is data pertaining to a comparison of the mediocre cost that four distinct mobile phone companies
charge
for monthly contracts in 2002. The units are measured in Wrong verb form
charged
euros
.
Overall
, three out of four the price of contracts experienced an upward trend whereas
the opposite was true for Sim
TX
. Additionally
, Alpha underwent the most dramatic climb in the last
four months.
Regarding Domo and Lex, the two figures fluctuated to quite similar degrees. Domo offered the most expensive plan at around 15 euros
in the first month, followed by Lex at 12 euros
, albeit in the last
three months, Domo enjoyed a downward tendency and finally
ended at 23 euros
, while
Lex was the opposite and ended at 18 euros
.
Moving onto two remaining figures, which had the significant opposite in price. Sim
TX
started at 9 euros
while
the beginning point of Alpha was at 5 euros
. Five months later, they enjoyed a fluctuation but still remained the same distance. However
, three years later, Alpha surpassed Sim
TX
in Jujy and soared to reach the highest point in September at 25 euros
. While
Sim
TX
declined in price and turned into the least one.Submitted by [email protected] on
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