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The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts
illustrates
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illustrate
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 the main drawbacks and benefits of Bowen
Island
, on
the
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apply
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behalf of surveyors who visited there. In
following
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the following
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 paragraphs, I will describe the both pros and cons of living in
specific
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a specific
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 region. There are many negative sides
of
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to
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this
island
, it is clearly seen that
cost
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the cost
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 of living is very high it is about full half of the other sources, entertainment is only 25%,
weather
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the weather
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 is not
much
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very
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 good for living and the quality of food is very bad where surveyors gave the rank to
meal
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a meal
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 only 10%.
However
, there are
also
 some positive sides
of
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to
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 living there, the individuals are of good nature, the view is very attractive and the proportion of good accommodation and culture is
alnost
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almost
 same where the food and environment
is
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are
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 not suitable.
Overall
, it is evident that
island
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an island
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 or continent has its own speciality so
at
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apply
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Bowen
island
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Island
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 view is perfect to attract tourists but
expenses
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the expenses
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 of living are higher.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • According to the survey
  • Visitors reported
  • The pie charts show
  • The most common advantages/disadvantages
  • A significant proportion
  • A small percentage
  • In contrast
  • Notably
  • The largest segment
  • Similarly
  • On the other hand
  • A major advantage/disadvantage
  • To highlight
  • Overall effect
  • Impact the experience
  • In summary
  • Illustrates
  • Reflects
  • Highlights
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