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The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.

The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.
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The bar chart
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 information about the percentage of renewable
energy
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 in
total
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energy
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 supply in 4 different including
Australia
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,
Sweden
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, Iceland and Turkey, over the course of 13 years, beginning in 1997.   Looking from an
overall
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it is clear that
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proportion
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renewable
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energy
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 sources in
Sweden
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 and Iceland experienced an upward trend throughout the period. It can be seen that the alternative
energy
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 was
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proportion
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 in
Australia
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 and
Sweden
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. In
the
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Iceland, the share of renewable
energy
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 increased sharply around 10% every
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period, from 1997 to 2010. The percentage of alternative
energy
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 in Turkey grew slowly between nearly 38% and 40% in the first three years, before hitting a sharp decrease to around 35% in 2010. In comparison with the figure for the
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 of renewable
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 in
Sweden
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, which witnessed a gradual increase,the quantity in
Australia
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 fell significantly. For
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Australia
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 the quantity of
alternativestarted
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alternative started
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 about 10%, before
decreased
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 moderately to around 5% in 2010.
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the
proportion
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 of the use renewable
energy
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 sources in
Sweden
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 rose gradually from 5% to around 10%
in
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 the end of
period
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the period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, australia, sweden, proportion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • renewable energy
  • total energy supply
  • percentage
  • overall
  • changed
  • increases
  • decreases
  • fluctuating
  • trend
  • highest
  • lowest
  • significant
  • commitment
  • sustainability
  • environmental protection
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