It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

While

it is widely claimed that primary children experiencing farm's

lifes

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will benefit them tremendously, others argue that

such

activity

making

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their children at risk of animal-related infections and accidents and rather opt for other types of activity

instead

. Both

point

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of

views

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and reasons why I agree with its positive development will be elaborated on in

this

essay.

To begin

with, it

seem

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sensible for some to

believed

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that providing schoolers

to

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with

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farming can bring numerous benefits

such

as means of

situation based

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teaching like

responsibilty

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responsibility

.

This

is possibly because when growing crops or keeping

livestocks

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livestock

require

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both caring and responsibility

to

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for

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watering plants

,

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and feeding

animal

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animals

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regularly so that they will

no

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not

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died

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from starving. Take Japan,

for example

; in primary school there often

have

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pets in school

such

as rabbits and

chicken

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chickens

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and the teacher will assign them to take care of the

animals

. Through

this

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activities,

besides

responsibility, it

also

promoting

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heartwarming consideration of the

animals

by

lookin

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looking

after them. Many opponents of

this

idea might

opposed

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that

by

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apply

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letting them

involving

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with wildlife can be risky for them to get infected and unwanted accidents prone to

happened

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due to

their

curiosty

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curiosity

and

unappropriate

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inappropriate

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approach to

animals

. To simply explain, the students in

this

phase

is

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alert, energetic, and full of

curiosty

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curiosity

about things, without proper control and

supervisioned

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supervision

can lead to tragic incidents.

For example

; there is a viral video clip on social media of a boy

get

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kicked by

the

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horse from the back as he

rushing

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to it with excitement

which

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he

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later reported in a severely injured condition and unfortunately passed away.

However

, I personally argue in favour of allowing these kids to

involve

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with

natures

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nature

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seeing that

help

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helps

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kids to explore

the

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nature and

as well as

to create

a preferable habits

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in

a

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apply

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fun and creative ways. In summary,

although

it is undeniable that

their

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is a

possiblity

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possibility

of accidents and medical issues

of

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with

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letting young kids

exploring

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explore

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nature and

animals

, I am of the opinion that its positive

feedbacks

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outweights

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outweighs

outweigh

its detrimental outcomes.