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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams IELTS Essay

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In
this
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 contemporary epoch, there has been a skyrocketing
behavior
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 in assessing
students
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 through
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exam
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exams
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instead
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 of continual
assessment
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. It is beneficial as exams provide written clarification to a
student
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as well as
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 putting a
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 into more
theory
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 practice for their disciples.
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, they have limitations, as they don’t give practical knowledge to pupils by limiting them to a
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theory
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approach
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of
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 a particular subject.
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assessment
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assessments
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 with exams is that it is a prudent
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 to give
students
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 their performance evaluation as it implements stringent rules and yardsticks.
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, if a
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 is performing
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 in an
exam
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, the score result in that
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 will give the
student
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 a boost in their confidence to perform more effectively.
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, the writing
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 helps a
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 to understand what they need to work more
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 by finding trivial mistakes which
prevents
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 the pupil from achieving something far better.
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,
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 to the above
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,
this
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approach
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 of using exams as an
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 these days could be a colossal mistake as
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prevent
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students
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to achieve
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from achieving
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 an implicit faith when it comes to
practical
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the practical
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 application of knowledge. As depicted by
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the University
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 of Toronto in a survey in 2019,
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student
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students
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 who
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 more confident in the practical
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 of their respective study domain
,
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is
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 getting
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enormously
compared
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successful compared
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 to any other
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theory prone
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student
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.
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, the above-mentioned statement has its pros and cons, as sometimes there is a more proactive need for practical
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 as it gives more concern in
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 learning, whilst, in some cases, there is a
crave
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 to succeed more in practical
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 as it brings a paradigm shift in the confidence of the
students
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Language
Your essay should maintain a consistent tone and avoid mixing informal expressions with formal language. Phrases like "skyrocketing behavior" are too colloquial for an academic essay.
Development
Provide more specific and detailed examples to support your arguments. For instance, instead of referencing a 'University of Toronto survey,' you could specify what aspect of practical application was surveyed and how it related to student success.
Structure
Ensure smooth transitions between paragraphs and ideas. This will improve the logical flow of your essay.
Structure
You have a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps to frame your argument effectively.
Content
Your essay addresses both the benefits and limitations of exams, showing a balanced perspective.
Development
You attempt to provide relevant examples to support your points, which is good practice in IELTS essays.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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