The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980

The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980
The bar chart illustrates the number of prisoners in five nations, namely Great Britain,
Australia
, New
Zealand
, the United States and Canada during the five decades starting in 1930. In general, what stands out from the figure is that the deprivation of liberty rose moderately in the United States and Great Britain compared to other developed countries, throughout a fifty-year period.
However
, there was a slight decline in imprisonment in Canada,
Australia
and New
Zealand
. As can be seen from the data, the upward trend of imprisonment was in Canada, which stood at 120,000 by 1930. It fluctuated over the five decades. In the year
1983
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the number of convicts constituted about 80000.
In addition
, the US had the highest rate of incarceration about 130,000 in 1940 and 140,000 in 1980, respectively. In terms of the downward trend, it was in New
Zealand
(100,000) and
Australia
(approximately 70,000) in 1930. In both figures, the number of prisoners fluctuated considerably during the given period.
In contrast
,
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the end, the proportion of prisoners consisted of just 85000 in New
Zealand
and more than 45,000 in
Australia
.
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