In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

In today's digital age, there is a rise in
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who
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curious, which
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to
spend
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money on imported
food
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more
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than local
food
.
However
,
this
can be tackled by increasing
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on imported
food
, including
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focuses
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of
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traditional
food
. It must be understood that having
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curiosity
can impact on
customer
's spending.
This
is especially so if the person who
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buying foreign
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because imported
food
is
alway
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always
suitable to their habit.
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,
curiosity
make
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people
misunderstanding
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about
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imported
food
that
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and
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consumers think it is better than traditional
food
because of money cost.
As a consequence
, foreign
food
is bought by many people as a trend.
For example
, cherry fruit in foreign countries and orange fruit in Vietnam have the same
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vitamin C inside them, but most
vietnamese
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consumers choose to spend more money on
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because of people's
curiosity
about
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. Another argument worth considering is that
government
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should increase
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taxes
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on foreign
product
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products
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to improve the number of local
food
spending. When increasing
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taxes
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, the individual may feel that foreign
food
is less attractive.
Consequently
, consumers decided to focus on traditional
food
, leading to the improvement of them.
For instance
,
according to
an article published in Vietnam in 2023, a majority of American
food
was out of date because of high
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taxes
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that
make
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customer
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customers
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did not focus on. In conclusion,
curiosity
is the most significant reason that
impact
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impacts
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on foreign
food
spending by
customer
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customers
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.
However
,
those problem
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can be tackled by
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govenment
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increasing
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tax
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on imported
food
to manage
traditional
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the traditional
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product
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.
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task achievement
Ensure to thoroughly explain and support each main point in your essay. For example, when discussing why people buy imported food, provide more detailed examples and explanations.
coherence cohesion
Work on logically structuring your essay. Make sure each paragraph flows smoothly into the next, with clear transition sentences that link ideas together.
coherence cohesion
Revise your grammar and vocabulary usage. There were some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affected the overall clarity of your writing.
task achievement
Your essay provides a complete response to both questions, addressing why people buy imported food and what can be done to encourage people to buy local food.
coherence cohesion
You have included an introduction and a conclusion, which helps to frame your essay.
task achievement
The examples provided, such as the cherry and orange comparison, help to illustrate your points and make your argument clear.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • allure
  • novelty
  • diversity
  • perception
  • premium
  • globalization
  • cuisines
  • economic factors
  • subsidies
  • tariffs
  • competitive
  • farm-to-table
  • eco-conscious
  • consumption
  • sustainability
  • local economy
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