In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

recently, there has been an increasing demand for foreign
food
and people have started ignoring local
food
.
This
is because citizens believe that it is better in quality and safer, in order to bring consumer's interest back to locally produced
food
,
this
author believes local producers should push more advertisements on their
food
. It is evident that people's interest in foodstuff leans toward imported
products
due to
its
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their
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commitment to high character and safety.
In other words
, these
products
are strictly checked for condition and ensured to be safe to
consumed
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consume
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.
As a consequence
,
customers
assume it to be more delicious and contain
high
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more
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nutrients than local goods.
For example
, imported fruits like bananas and strawberries are advertised to be planted on fertile land and contain no pesticides, which are the main points
crowd
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the crowd
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prefer
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prefers
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using them.
However
, there are some viable methods to prompt consumers to eat domestic
food
, including advertising. local cuisine has a low profile and seems to be not appealing to
customers
, farmers may have to prove their
products
are worth buying in order to attract their
customers
. so that lots of consumers may find local
products
are better than overseas ones thanks to advertisements.
For example
, in Vietnam, local strawberry consumption is now increasing
as a result
of well-advertising by letting
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the public
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public
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the public
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try samples. In conclusion, there are more and more
community
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communities
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buying imported foodstuff
due to
its high
element
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elements
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and safety.
However
, a method to appeal to
customers
by advertising is deemed to be practical and is bringing consumers back to local
products
.
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grammar
Review subject-verb agreement to correct minor grammatical errors, which will improve clarity.
content
Expand on the reasons why people prefer imported food with more detail and examples to further strengthen the main points.
structure
Ensure each paragraph has one central idea and flows logically to strengthen coherence.
task achievement
The essay addresses both parts of the question: why people buy imported food and how to encourage local food consumption.
structure
A clear introduction and conclusion are present, effectively framing the essay.
task achievement
Relevant and specific examples, such as the example from Vietnam, are used to support the points made.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • allure
  • novelty
  • diversity
  • perception
  • premium
  • globalization
  • cuisines
  • economic factors
  • subsidies
  • tariffs
  • competitive
  • farm-to-table
  • eco-conscious
  • consumption
  • sustainability
  • local economy
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