In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?
recently, there has been an increasing demand for foreign
food
and people have started ignoring local food
. This
is because citizens believe that it is better in quality and safer, in order to bring consumer's interest back to locally produced food
, this
author believes local producers should push more advertisements on their food
.
It is evident that people's interest in foodstuff leans toward imported products
due to
its
commitment to high character and safety. Correct pronoun usage
their
In other words
, these products
are strictly checked for condition and ensured to be safe to consumed
. Change the form of the verb
consume
As a consequence
, customers
assume it to be more delicious and contain high
nutrients than local goods. Correct word choice
more
For example
, imported fruits like bananas and strawberries are advertised to be planted on fertile land and contain no pesticides, which are the main points crowd
Correct article usage
the crowd
prefer
using them.
Correct subject-verb agreement
prefers
However
, there are some viable methods to prompt consumers to eat domestic food
, including advertising. local cuisine has a low profile and seems to be not appealing to customers
, farmers may have to prove their products
are worth buying in order to attract their customers
. so that lots of consumers may find local products
are better than overseas ones thanks to advertisements. For example
, in Vietnam, local strawberry consumption is now increasing as a result
of well-advertising by letting Correct article usage
the public
public
try samples.
In conclusion, there are more and more Correct article usage
the public
community
buying imported foodstuff Fix the agreement mistake
communities
due to
its high element
and safety. Fix the agreement mistake
elements
However
, a method to appeal to customers
by advertising is deemed to be practical and is bringing consumers back to local products
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grammar
Review subject-verb agreement to correct minor grammatical errors, which will improve clarity.
content
Expand on the reasons why people prefer imported food with more detail and examples to further strengthen the main points.
structure
Ensure each paragraph has one central idea and flows logically to strengthen coherence.
task achievement
The essay addresses both parts of the question: why people buy imported food and how to encourage local food consumption.
structure
A clear introduction and conclusion are present, effectively framing the essay.
task achievement
Relevant and specific examples, such as the example from Vietnam, are used to support the points made.
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