The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each category from five organisations.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each category from five organisations.
The bar chart compares five different
organisations
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in terms of investment in machinery, building, staff training and
research
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.
Overall
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, organisation B spends a higher budget on these categories compared to the others,
while
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organisations
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D and E invest the least.
In addition
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, the spending pattern of organisation C is the most different from the remaining ones. Looking at
organisations
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A and B, it can be seen that each of them allocates more than €1
billion
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for building, employee training and
research
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, with the former investing the most in building (€1.5
billion
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) and the latter spending the most (€1.9
billion
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) providing training for its workers. Machinery is the least invested category in both
organisations
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, €1
billion
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and €0.9
billion
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respectively. Turning to
organisations
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D and E, the largest investment goes to the building category, with each devoting €1
billion
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,
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while
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funding for
research
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is the lowest, €0.6 and €0.7
billion
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accordingly
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. In organisation C,
however
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, the highest funding is for machinery and
research
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(€1.3 million each),
whereas
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the figures for building and staff training are lower, €1 and 0.8
billion
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respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words organisations, research, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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