In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?
It is true that citizens from lots of nations prefer to buy imported
food
produce than local ones. However
,it can be solved by improve
quality and Wrong verb form
improving
put
more advertising.
It can be seen that foods from foreign countries are invested heavily. Wrong verb form
putting
Firstly
, the medium is used to attract customer
to make Fix the agreement mistake
customers
thay
believe that imported Correct your spelling
them
food
is appetizing .People often choose foods Add the particle
to depend
depend
on how it packing and look tasty so that imported Wrong verb form
depending
food
easy to sold out
.Wrong verb form
sell
Secondly
, imported food
provide
a welcome change. Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
These
are many Correct your spelling
There
complains
the local Replace the word
complaints
food
is become
boring with them so Change to the active voice
becomes
has become
that
want to find flavour which can stimulate their taste buds. Correct pronoun usage
they
For example
, in Vietnam these
are many trends of eating Correct your spelling
there
Korean'
Change noun form
Korean
noodle
,it is Fix the agreement mistake
noodles
beacause
Correct your spelling
because
the
different Change preposition
of the
feelinf
from the Correct your spelling
feeling
spicy
.
It is possible ,Correct pronoun usage
spicy ones
however
, to take steps to encourage the Correct your spelling
consumption
comsumption
of locally produced Correct your spelling
consumption
food
.The standard should be improved carefully like alway
Correct your spelling
always
keep
it clean and Wrong verb form
keeping
look
delicious. It Wrong verb form
looking
also
collab with advertising to take more useful. For instance
, in Vietnam we have Cong Coffee can do both things, they make it prefect
in wrapping and marketing on Correct your spelling
perfect
thr
internet and that was Correct your spelling
the
success
.
In conclusion, many people would like to eat imported Add an article
a success
food
because it brings new flavour . Correct your spelling
Nevertheless
Neverthreless
,Correct your spelling
Nevertheless
Fix the agreement mistake
locals
local
Fix the agreement mistake
locals
also
can
tackle it by changing the quality of Verb problem
apply
food
and Wrong verb form
using
use
media to change the Wrong verb form
using
Correct your spelling
attitude
atitude
of Correct your spelling
attitude
customer
.Add an article
the customer
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- secondly
- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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