Write a letter to the airport flight manager about missing a business trip due to an accident that happened at the airport. Explain • - what was the accident? • - what was the result of missing the flight? • - what do you want them to do?
Dear manager,
I am writing
this
letter to bring to your intention
the issues we are Correct your spelling
attention
Correct your spelling
facing
faecing
in your Correct your spelling
facing
airport
today the issues with I leave my plane
When i
come to Change the capitalization
I
waiting
room I find wildfire in Add an article
the waiting
the
some rooms Remove the article
apply
untill
Correct your spelling
until
i
Change the capitalization
I
cannot
see my room because Wrong verb form
could not
smoke
is thick smoke.Correct article usage
the smoke
Also
I did not see my friends because of it Add a comma
Also,
untill
I lost them.Correct your spelling
until
Fourthermore
,it was late to Correct your spelling
Furthermore
handled
Wrong verb form
handle
by
employees from Correct pronoun usage
it by
airport
and many people there Add an article
the airport
was
very Correct subject-verb agreement
were
angre
Correct your spelling
angry
to
Change preposition
about
service
Correct article usage
the service
airport
.Correct article usage
the airport
In
addition
they want to come back to their house.Add a comma
addition,
Then
time
table of Correct your spelling
the
plane
is Add an article
the plane
a plane
delay
.
It was Wrong verb form
delayed
very
Correct article usage
a very
teriable
day Correct your spelling
terrible
to
me and I lost Change preposition
for
my
time to meet with my family, and my wife always Correct pronoun usage
apply
call
me to find me Wrong verb form
called
in
the Change preposition
at
airport
.This
is bacause
of Correct your spelling
because
accident
Add an article
an accident
the accident
in
Change preposition
at
airport
.Correct article usage
the airport
Then
I lost my time,money
.
I would like to do two things that you should do Correct word choice
and money
in
the Change preposition
at
airport
.First,you have good rules to help when accident
come Correct article usage
an accident
anad
clear the problem.Correct your spelling
and
Secondly
,you have many times to inform before problem
Correct article usage
a problem
come
and you should do Correct subject-verb agreement
comes
this
I look forward to Correct your spelling
hearing
heraing
from you soon
Correct your spelling
hearing
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Yours
Your
sincerely
AbiCorrect your spelling
Yours
Submitted by patricius.yohanes on
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coherence cohesion
Try to organize your thoughts more logically. Group similar points together and follow a clear structure: introduction, body, and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a single idea to improve readability.
task achievement
Provide more details about the accident and link your suggestions clearly to the problems you've described.
task achievement
The letter addresses all parts of the task: the accident, the results of missing the flight, and the requests for action.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is generally appropriate for a formal complaint.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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