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You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development Write at least 150 words.

#plan #airport #flights #newspaper #development
Dear manager of
airport
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the airport
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 I am writing
this
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airport
 that you will build near
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by
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my house for two weeks letter. I
leave
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live
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 in
small
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a small
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 town
nearst
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nearest
 with the
airport
.
Then
,
i
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 have many rise
field
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fields
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 near with
airport
 and
i
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 can go anywhere because of
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the material
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material
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materials
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 of
airport
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the airport
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.it is very
bother
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 for society over there,and many people complain about
this
issues
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issue
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,they
was
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apply
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disagree with it.
The
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They
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 are major issues with
the
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how to build the buildings there,which is their
raisefield
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raise field
raise-field
ricefield
 will be taken by the local
goverment untill
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government until
 they can plant rice again there.
Also
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 their ground will be taken by
manager
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the manager
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 of
airport
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the airport
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,and it make
farmer
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the farmer
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lost
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lose
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their
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them
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in come
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income
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 for
everyday
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 and it is very
dangereous
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dangerous
 to many people there.After that,they
not
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do not
did not
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 have
right
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the right
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for taking
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to take
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this
 place. Many
reason
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reasons
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of
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for
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this
 problem
are
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is
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 a lot of society there cannot do their activities
as usual
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, as usual,
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such
 as going to their
fild
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field
 and they will not have
for finding
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to find
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 much money
bacause
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because
 of
goverment
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government
 will take it from them.
Nevertheless
,they will no own come from
this
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because
becaouse
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because
 one of
this
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these
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 is
support
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to support
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 the economy
foe
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for
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 local society there I look forward to
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hearing
haering
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hearing
 from you Yours sincerely Abi
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Town Location
Provide more specific details about where you live to give the reader a better understanding of the context. For instance, name the town and provide more information about its proximity to the airport.
Paragraph Clarity
Organize your paragraphs so that each one contains a single main idea. For example, have separate paragraphs for describing the problem, giving reasons for your opposition, and suggesting potential solutions.
Grammar and Punctuation
Ensure that sentence structures are clear and grammatically correct. Avoid run-on sentences and ensure appropriate punctuation to improve readability.
Tone and Address
Use a formal and polite tone throughout the letter and address the newspaper editor respectfully. For instance, begin with 'Dear Editor.'
Key Points Coverage
You have addressed several key points including your location, the problem, and reasons for opposing the development, which is essential for a complete response.
Personal Concern
The letter is written with a genuine concern for the impact this development will have on the local community and its economy, showing a strong personal investment in the issue.
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