The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The column charts illustrate the destination of UK
graduate
and postgraduate
students
who did not choose a full-time job after college in 2008.
Overall
, the
number
of both
graduate
and postgraduate
students
who chose
further
study was the highest among all categories.
However
, the figure for voluntary work was the lowest by far in each chart.
To begin
with,
further
study was the most popular among
graduate
and postgraduate learners with 29,665 and 2,725
students
respectively.
Moreover
, the
number
of
students
who were involved in voluntary jobs accounted for the least
number
of
students
with 3,500
graduate
students
and 345
students
who were studying for a second qualification.
In addition
, the figure for
students
who tend to be occupied in a part-time job is the second highest with 17,735 and 2,535
graduate
and postgraduate individuals separately. It is worth noting that, 16,235
graduate
students
were unemployed after leaving college.
Nevertheless
,
this
number
is much fewer with regard to postgraduate
students
with 1,625 scholars in 2008.
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  • Graduate
  • Postgraduate
  • Full-time work
  • Further education
  • Part-time work
  • Unemployment
  • Volunteering
  • Traveling
  • Gap year
  • Career progression
  • Job market
  • Transition
  • Academic life
  • Professional sphere
  • Economic factors
  • Social factors
  • Financial crisis
  • Long-term impact
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