You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
This
line graph illustrate
the data about how many people Change the verb form
illustrates
were
graduated from universities in Canada classified by their gender between 1992 and 2007.
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Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the number of female graduates
was higher than their male counterparts throughout the whole period. Moreover
, during the time given in question, the population of female university students who successfully finished their studies rose by about 50%, while
regarding men, the growth was much less significant.
If we take look
at Correct article usage
a look
details
, with respect to female Correct article usage
the details
graduates
, although
there was a slight dip between 1995 to 2000, the general trend of the figure was upward reaching its peak in 2007 with just under 150,000 graduates
.
Concerning the male degree holders, there was a fluctuation in their attendance untill
2001, after which the number of male Correct your spelling
until
graduates
went up sharply to its peak in 2007.Submitted by mhmdnekooeian on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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