The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report describing the information shown below The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report describing the information shown below

The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report describing the information shown below

The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report describing the information shown below
The bare chart illustrates information about children between 5-14 years old who participate in selected
entertanment
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entertainment
activities in Australia.
Overall
, Watching TV is the most popular activity for both genders .
While
the total percentages of skateboarding and rollerblading are the lowest .Girl's data are relatively low compared to boys. On one hand, with regard to males skateboarding and rollerblading and
Art
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and
craft
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crafts
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had the lowest percentages at around 40%. Watching TV and videos are the top in the list for both genders at 100%.Bick riding
,
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and electronic and computer games had roughly 75%and 80% respectively.
On the other hand
,
girls
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girls'
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data seem to be similar. Bick riding and electronic, and
electronicand
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electronic and
computer,Art and craft are approximately the same at about 60% . Skateboarding and rollerblading
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less than 30%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • engagement levels
  • leisure activities
  • downward trend
  • popularity
  • participation rates
  • comparisons
  • analyze
  • general trends
  • highlight
  • significance
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