The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report describing the information shown below The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report describing the information shown below
The bare chart illustrates information about children between 5-14 years old who participate in selected
entertanment
activities in Australia.
Correct your spelling
entertainment
Overall
, Watching TV is the most popular activity for both genders . While
the total percentages of skateboarding and rollerblading are the lowest .Girl's data are relatively low compared to boys.
On one hand, with regard to males skateboarding and rollerblading and Art
and Fix the agreement mistake
Arts
craft
had the lowest percentages at around 40%. Watching TV and videos are the top in the list for both genders at 100%.Bick riding Fix the agreement mistake
crafts
,
and electronic and computer games had roughly 75%and 80% respectively.
Remove the comma
apply
On the other hand
, girls
data seem to be similar. Bick riding and electronic, and Change noun form
girls'
girl's
electronicand
computer,Art and craft are approximately the same at about 60% . Skateboarding and rollerblading Correct your spelling
electronic and
just
less than 30%.Add a missing verb
are just
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