The pie chart illustrates the proportion of persons who are captured and the bar chart illustrates the reason why they are captured in the five years ending 1994

The below diagram shows the

percentage

of

men

and

women

that

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are being arrested within 5 5-year time span. In another part, the line graph depicts the underlying matters of the arrest. In general, the vast majority of the prisoners are

men

and arrested

due to

drinking in public arrangements.

To begin

with, male

prioners

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prisoners

comprise 32% of the

overall

men

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population, which

nearly

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4 times larger than

women

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captives

percentage

.

Reasons

of

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captivation vary from inappropriate alcohol

consumptions

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consumption

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,

assaults

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and assaults

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, to undisclosed

reasons

. As clearly seen, more than half of the

reasons

are from alcohol issues, whether performed in public or in a car. It is

also

interesting to note that

women

hold the highest number of public drinking

violation

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.

Furthermore

, the

percentage

of other

reasons

that resulted

to

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punishments are coming almost equally to each

others

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other

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.

Assults

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Assaults

,

breach

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breaches

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of

ordesr

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order

orders

,

theft

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and theft

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issues account

between

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13 to 19 per cent for all genders.

Lastly

, some of the

men

and

women

arrests ignore to open the matters to

public

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the public

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, with

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the percentage

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percentage

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percentages

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of 4.5% and 7% respectively.