The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate a survey conducted by travellers about the benefits and drawbacks of Bowen
Island
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of the negative side is the high cost of living, while
the least was about the weather.Also
,the people and scenery accounted a
greater proportion on the positive side.
Regarding the most common disadvantages, half of the tourists reported the high standard of living on Bowen Change preposition
for a
Island
.This
figure was the highest percentage of the demerits. Entertainment recorded 25%.Besides
, the food quality and weather accounted for 10% and 15% respectively.
In contrast
, the most common merits
of visiting Bowen Fix the agreement mistake
merit
Island
was the people which was 42%. This
figure was the first highest and the second highest was 35% which was the scenery of the Island
. Moreover
, the figures for the culture and good accommodation was
11% and 12% respectively.Correct subject-verb agreement
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