The line graph illustrates the amount of spreads consumed from 1981 to 2007, in grams. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates the amount of spreads consumed from 1981 to 2007, in grams.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the consumption rate of three spreads,
margarine
, low-fat and reduced spreads, and
butter
, from 1981 to 2007. It is mentioned that
margarine
and
butter
are used earlier than low-fat and reduced spreads. At the start of the period
butter
was the most famous product, which was replaced by
margarine
from 1991 to 2001, and following that low-fat and reduced spreads were the most spreads in the
last
years. At the start of the chart, the amount of
butter
was 140
reach
Wrong verb form
reached
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the highest point of the period and
margarine
stay
Wrong verb form
stayed
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at 90
grams
in 1981. In 1986 the amount of
butter
spread consisted of about 160
grams
after 5 years
butter
crossed with
margarine
which level showed 100
grams
in 1991 and year by year
butter
lost its state.
Likewise
, 90
grams
of
margarine
was eaten in the first year after which the figure fluctuated slightly and dropped to a low of 40
grams
in 2007. The consumption of low-fat and reduced spreads only started in 1996 with 10
grams
and was less popular than shortening and
margarine
in
this
period.
However
,
this
figure reached a high of just over 80
grams
during the 5 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words margarine, butter, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.

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