The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
The line graph depicts the frequency of
people
asking for information between January
and June at a UK tourist office
. As can be seen from the chart, the number
of people
coming to the office
and using the telephone to ask for info witnessed an upward trend. However
, fewer people
communicated through letters to the office
throughout the period.
In January
, direct request was the least popular type of communication to get info from the tourist office
, with only 400 people
using this
method. This
number
had a big rise climbing up to 800 people
in March and more than 1800 people
reaching the highest position after 4 months. The number
of tourists using the telephone to look for guidance in January
was about 900 people
. Consequently
, at the end
of the period, this
number
almost doubled to 1600 people
. People
using letters or email had dropped from 800 people
in January
to only half in May and this
trend continued until the end of the period.Submitted by nguyenvuthaison3005 on
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