The bar chart below shows the percentage participation of men in senior development in three companies between 1980 and the year 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart represents the proportion of
participation
of men
in senior development
divided into three companies, namely IBM, Microsoft, and Apple in a
over 30 Change the article
an
year-period
.
Correct your spelling
year period
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage
of men
in senior development
in
IBM Change preposition
at
company
had an
increased significantly, and followed by Correct article usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
microsoft
Change the capitalization
Microsoft
company
the proportion of participation
senior
in Fix the agreement mistake
seniors
development
had slightly
growth, Change the adverb
slight
while
the apple
Capitalize word
Apple
company
was remain
steady.
In detail, in 1980, the Change the verb form
remained
percentage
of participation
men
in senior Change preposition
of men
development
had significant
increased and in 2000 the proportion of Change the word
significantly
participation
had quickly increased just
over 60% in 2010. Meanwhile, the share of Change preposition
to just
participation
of the Microsoft company
had a
slightly increased from 1980 to 2000, and the Correct article usage
apply
percentage
had dramatically improve
Change the verb form
improved
just
under 50% in the Change preposition
to just
of
Change preposition
apply
period
.
Add an article
the period
In contrast
, the ratio of the participation
of men
in senior development
in the Apple company
had remain
steady, and in 1980 the Change the verb form
remained
percentage
of participation
around
15% and in the Add a missing verb
was around
of
period only Change preposition
apply
slight
increase Correct article usage
a slight
just
over 20%.Change preposition
of just
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