People
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that the major issue related to the environment is the extinction of
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rare
animals
but
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others
arguedWrong verb form
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that there are many problems more urgent than. The writer of
this
essay agreed that the disappearance of uncommon
animals
is not the most instant
problem
.
It can be seen that there are many important
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the
. Nowadays, people are faced
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many environmental issues
such
as
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out of fossil fuels, climate
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or deforestation
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a direct impact
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people's
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climate changes make the earth
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hoterChange the word
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and
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,
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thenCorrect word choice
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the melting ice
leadCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to the
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of seawater
affect toWrong verb form
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the coastal
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.
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, it is easy to understand that we
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to focus on many
anotherCorrect quantifier usage
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environmental
problemFix the agreement mistake
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However
, many residents argued that the disappearance of special
animals
is the most urgent issue. Every
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is important and if some
animals
disappear, it will
be Unnecessary verb
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affect
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the cycle of life.
This
point may be true, but it
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very urgent if just one animal species
disappearCorrect subject-verb agreement
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and we need to pay attention to
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other issues
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,
otherwise
, we should not ignore the
animals
The writer believed that we need to concentrate on many different
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.
This
is
due to
the fact that we
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a lot of significant
concernFix the agreement mistake
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and
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with
animals Fix the agreement mistake
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problem
is
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a Change preposition
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lot of time and money. Because of
this
, there are so many
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to
with Change preposition
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and it
moreAdd a missing verb
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important than the extinction of
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rare
animals
.
In conclusion, the issue with species
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is very important but there are many more urgent problems we need to tackle
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.
Hence
, it should
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attention
onChange preposition
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several
matterChange to a plural noun
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.