The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village lberaries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The given line graph displays the number of

books

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that were borrowed from the four different libraries in the months of

June

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, July, August, and

September

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year

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the year

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2014, and the pie chart depicts distinct percentages of the borrowed

books

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by their types.

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, it can be seen that the

numbers

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of the Ryeslip village decreased, Sutton Wood's

numbers

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showed a fluctuation;

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, West Eaton's and Church Mount's

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increased.

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, in the types of

books

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, Fiction had the highest

percentage

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and self-help had the lowest

percentage

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. In the month of

June

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, the number of

books

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borrowed from Ryeslip Library was 300;

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then

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it showed a significant decrease and plummeted to around 175 by the month of

September

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, Sutton Wood's number was 250 in the month of

June

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then

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it increased slightly to around 275 in July,

then

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it had a sharp fall in August to 100;

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, it

then

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again reached a plateau in

September

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to 300.

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, West Eaton and Church Mountain started at the same point in

June

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at 50,

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their

numbers

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increased to 100 by

September

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and they

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ended at the same point. In terms of types of

books

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borrowed, fiction was the highest borrowed book with a

percentage

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of 43%;

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, history and science had the same

percentage

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of 14%.

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biography was the second highest borrowed book with 19%;

in contrast

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, self-help was the least borrowed with only 10%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however, in contrast, moreover, whereas".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 65%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, june, september, numbers, percentage with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

241 words

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