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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
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The given infographic demonstrates the development in an industrial zone throughout a
pacticular
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particular
 town
name
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 Norbiton,
as well as
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 the intention of future innovation
of
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 the area.
Overall
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,
there
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they
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 projected to
expand
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expansion
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 more
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road
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roads
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 and accommodations,
whereas
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 the
existance
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existence
 of new infrastructures
such
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 as
school
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schools
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,
playground
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playgrounds
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, medical
centre
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centres
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 and stores. On the eastern
road
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, the house
in
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at
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 the end of the street is expected to
be reconstruct
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to
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into
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 a school,
while
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 the
road
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 will be expanded to the north leading to a new playground for children, opposite
this
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road
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, where two houses will be converted to only one.
Moreover
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, the fork
in
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at
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 the bottom of the map no longer be changed to a
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crossroad
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cross
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crossroad
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road
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 with the construction of the medical centre
on
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in
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 the south-eastern of the region

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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