the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 year ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The
diagaram
shows Correct your spelling
diagram
layout
of the Central Add an article
the layout
a layout
Library
from 20 years ago compared to the current condition. Generally, the library
has more facilities now, compared to two decades ago, along with
several technology installments
.
Back Change the spelling
instalments
then
, the library
had two big round tables along with
several chairs right at the heart of the library
and 3 rooms on the corners. Overall
, the area was divided into six sections which was
sorted by category. Any information was provided from Change the verb form
were
enquiry
desk on the right side of the entrance. Correct article usage
the enquiry
Children
book was placed on the upper right corner of the map and Change noun form
Children's
reading
Correct article usage
the reading
room
was on the diagonal opposite.
Central library
today has four rooms now and three of them is
used for the additional facilities which are computer Correct subject-verb agreement
are
room
, cafe and lecturer room
. Most of the book
Fix the agreement mistake
books
placed
within the same area, except for Add a missing verb
were placed
children's
section Correct article usage
the children's
that
moved to the upper left corner of the map where it used to be Correct pronoun usage
which
CD
and Correct article usage
the CD
videos
Change the noun form
video
room
. It has removed the tables and chairs from the center
. but add some sofa on children's Change the spelling
centre
room
. The
Correct your spelling
They
also
have computers and even self-service machines near information
desk.Add an article
the information
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