the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 year ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The

diagaram

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diagram

shows

layout

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the layout

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of the Central

Library

from 20 years ago compared to the current condition. Generally, the

library

has more facilities now, compared to two decades ago,

along with

several technology

installments

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. Back

then

, the

library

had two big round tables

along with

several chairs right at the heart of the

library

and 3 rooms on the corners.

Overall

, the area was divided into six sections which

was

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sorted by category. Any information was provided from

enquiry

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the enquiry

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desk on the right side of the entrance.

Children

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Children's

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book was placed on the upper right corner of the map and

reading

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the reading

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room

was on the diagonal opposite. Central

library

today has four rooms now and three of them

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are

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used for the additional facilities which are computer

room

, cafe and lecturer

room

. Most of the

book

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books

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placed

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were placed

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within the same area, except for

children's

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the children's

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section

that

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which

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moved to the upper left corner of the map where it used to be

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the CD

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and

videos

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video

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room

. It has removed the tables and chairs from the

center

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centre

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. but add some sofa on children's

room

The

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They

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also

have computers and even self-service machines near

information

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the information

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desk.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

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