The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the local
fish
that were caught and the fresh
fish
imports
in metric
tons
in Perth, Australia for a decade, from 2004 until 2014.
Overall
, it is shown that both two trends fluctuated in that decade.
In addition
, we can see that the figures for local catches were higher than
imports
of fresh
fish
every year. To start with, the highest number of local catches was 8136.2 metric
tons
in 2008
while
the lowest was 2677.7 in 2004.
On the other hand
, the highest percentage of
imports
of fresh
fish
was 1227.3 metric
tons
in 2012
while
the lowest was 231.6 in 2005.
Additionally
, we can observe that in total, metric
tons
of local catches and fresh
fish
imports
peaked at 8949 metric
tons
in 2009.
Finally
, one year ago, in 2008, the highest difference between local and
imports
happened. In that year, local catches reached 8136.2, as I mentioned above, and
imports
were 717.8 metric
tons
.
This
significant difference was about 7500 metric
tons
.
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